I like Angelina Jolie the most. She is from America and very famous actress in the world. The main reason I like her is that she is really kind and love kids, and appearance is also gorgeous. Secondly, she travels poor countries and help the poor as a volunteer. She also donates lots of money to help people in Third World countries. Finally, Tomb Raider is my favorite movie among her great movies. I was really impressed with her acting. It was full of action. After watching that movie, I became a big fan of her. Someday, I want to see her in real life.

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-> She is from America and is a very famous actress in the world.

-> The main reason I like her is that she is really kind and loves kids. She is also gorgeous.

-> Secondly, she travels to poor countries and helps the poor as a volunteer.

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Hi Jason,

You did a good job in writing about your favorite actress. You were able to give a good description of her and you only had minimal lapses. Keep it up!

Fyi, she's one of my favorite actresses, too.