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제목 | Jogging/Walking | 등록일 | 2014-09-30 |
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내용 | When I was 30, I enjoyed the marathon. I signed up for the marathon once a month which was held near my house. The entry fee was normally less than 20 USD. I could receive the medal and lunch box with entry fee. My favorite course was running with Han-river. Han-river flows across the Seoul from east to west. I started running for my healthier body. When I was 20, I only played basketball for several hours. Marathon was boaring sport to me. However, this thinking was changed when I running the course, and achieved my goal. The feeling was little different with after playing the basketball. Theseday, I didn't play the marathon. Instead of it, I'm searching the home weight tranning with some babels. I want to have good body shape^^ I think, I'm getting fat like middle age of uncles. Wow, today is the last class of this month. I really approciate of your passion for teaching me. Bye. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-05 |
첨삭 내용 | When I was 30, I enjoyed the marathon. I signed up for the marathon once a month which was held near my house. The entry fee was normally less than 20 USD. I could receive the medal and lunch box with entry fee. My favorite course was running with Han-river. Han-river flows across the Seoul from east to west. I started running for my healthier body. When I was 20, I only played basketball for several hours. Marathon was boaring sport to me. However, this thinking was changed when I running the course, and achieved my goal. The feeling was little different with after playing the basketball. Theseday, I didn't play the marathon. Instead of it, I'm searching the home weight tranning with some babels. I want to have good body shape^^ I think, I'm getting fat like middle age of uncles. Wow, today is the last class of this month. I really approciate of your passion for teaching me. Bye.
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