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제목 | my weeknd | 등록일 | 2014-10-06 |
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내용 | i go jogging on weekends because i am too busy to jog during the week. i prefer to go jogging during the day when it is still light outside. i jog with my girlfriend. we meet in front of apartment complex in the morning. then we go to the park near our apartment. we usually jog in this park becuase it has many trails. i usually spend to jog weekends. |
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담당강사 | Ruzel | 등록일 | 2014-10-10 |
첨삭 내용 | i go jogging on weekends because i am too busy to jog during the week. i prefer to go jogging during the day when it is still light outside. i jog with my girlfriend. we meet in front of apartment complex in the morning. then we go to the park near our apartment. we usually jog in this park becuase it has many trails. i usually spend to jog weekends.
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-> I jog with my girlfriend and we meet in front of the apartment complex in the morning, then we go to the park near our apartment. we usually jog in this park becuase it has many trails. i usually spend to jog weekends. COMMENT: Hi Shin Juhwan, Thank you for writing. It is good to hear that you go jogging every weekends. Actually jogging is a good exercise. I am sure that you are enjoy jogging because you are with your girlfriend. Well, again thank you! Have a nice day!~^^
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