My favorite is "The attorney" which is called "Byun Ho In" in Korean. The movie is that a man pleaded the student who was in university and taught another students at night as voluntary service. Song gang ho starred in the movie. He is very famous actor participating a lot of works in Korea. In the movie, he fought against goverment power without his future and life. But he couldn't prevent the student from the goverment power. The movie was fiction which was based on reality. The main charactor became president 20 years later and he was first man who had his fans which is called NOSAMO in Korea. NOSAMO was the group of people who love president NO(last name) The movie and the his life impressed me beyound description. Please check my answer. thanks for your help.

1. My favorite is "The attorney" which is called "Byun Ho In" in Korean.  ->  My favorite move is "The attorney" which means "Byun Ho In" in Korean.

2. The movie is that a man pleaded the student who was in university and taught another students at night as voluntary service. ->  The movie is about a man that pleaded the student who was in the university and taught another set of students at night as voluntary service.

3. Song gang ho starred in the movie. He is very famous actor participating a lot of works in Korea. ->  Song Gang Ho starred in the movie. He is very famous actor participating a lot of works in Korea.

4. In the movie, he fought against goverment power without his future and life. -> In the movie, he fought against the goverment power without thinking about his future and his life.

5. But he couldn't prevent the student from the goverment power. -> But he couldn't prevent the student from the government's power.

6. The main charactor became president 20 years later and he was first man who had his fans which is called NOSAMO in Korea.  -> The main character became a president 20 years later and he was the first man who had fans called NOSAMO in Korea. 

7. NOSAMO was the group of people who love president NO(last name) ->  NOSAMO was the group of people who loved president NO.

8. The movie and the his life impressed me beyound description.  -> The movie and his life impressed me beyond description. 

Hi,

You did a good job! You were able to express your thoughts well very well. Just be careful in using verb tenses and other words like the articles. Nonetheless, it was a great job. Keep up the good work! :)

-Lovely