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| 제목 | Daily talk (Dental clinic) | 등록일 | 2014-10-13 |
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| 내용 | Last week, I went dental clinic. I used to visit dental clinic for checking up my teeth condition, regularalry. The atmosphere in clinic was so cozy, but i didn't like the sounds coming frome oprearion rooms. The reason why I was in there, i though my teeth is getting loose and it needed to be pulled out. but, Dentist examined my teeth conditions closely, and he told me that I have a lot of cavity on my teeth and it needed to be clean. so I had my teeth scaled and got some treatments. It was not painful but always I have trouble going dental clinic and afraid of being examined my teeths. After cleaning my teeth, I decided my self to take good care on my teeth, so I won't spend a lot of money in the future. |
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| 담당강사 | Christine1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-16 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Last week, I went to the dental clinic. I visit the dental clinic regularly to examine my teeth. The atmosphere at clinic was very cozy; however, I didn't like the sounds coming from the operating rooms.The reason why I went there was because I thought my teeth was getting loose and it needed to be extracted. The dentist examined my teeth, and he told me that I had a lot of cavities and they needed to be cleaned.The dentist cleaned my teeth and gave me some treatments. The procedure was not painful; nevertheless, I always have trouble going to the dental clinic and I am afraid of examining my teeth. After cleaning my teeth, I decided to take good care of them so that I don't have to spend a lot of money at the dentist in the future. |
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