I like to go shopping I usually go to the STAR CITY Store to shop things I want. There are a lot of small-sized mam-and-pop stores to look around. I generally go there twice or three times a month. My wife an I like to go the STAR CITY Store to buy things Because there are cheaper than department and I can buy various clothes and accessaries. After I got married, I don't go shopping along any more. I always go shopping with my wife because she helps me pick out some clothes or shoes well. It's a great place to shop, so I recommand you go there.

1. I like to go shopping GOOD JOB!

2. I usually go to the STAR CITY Store to shop things I want.  GOOD JOB!

3. There are a lot of small-sized mam-and-pop stores to look around. GOOD JOB!

4. I generally go there twice or three times a month. GOOD JOB!  or BETTER SAY ->  I generally go there twice or thrice a month.

5. My wife an I like to go the STAR CITY Store to buy things.  -> My wife and I lime to go to Star City Store to buy things.

6. Because there are cheaper than department and I can buy various clothes and accessaries. -> Because they are cheaper than department stores and I can buy various clothes and accessories.

7. After I got married, I don't go shopping along any more. GOOD JOB!

8. I always go shopping with my wife because she helps me pick out some clothes or shoes well. GOOD JOB!

9. It's a great place to shop, so I recommand you go there. -> It's a great place to shop, so I recommand you to go there.

Hi!

Good job! You were able to compose good sentences, and you were able to express your thoughts well. Just be careful in using the preposition "to". Nonetheless, you really did it good! Keep up the good work!

-Teacher Lovely