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제목	Work	등록일	2014-10-16
내용	We usually have an hour for lunch break from 11:30 to 12:30. Since there are too many people to eat lunch at one time in my company, so we divided with floors 15 minutes apart. Anyway I usually eat lunch with my coworkers in my department. There are 9 people in my project. Actually, I am a new employee so I still hard talk with my seniors so I always listen to their saying and only I can do is react to them. On the first and second basement there is company cafeteria. The cafeteria is really big to enjoy various food including Korean food, Italian food, Vietnam, chineese, Japaneese and so on. So, I can choose many type of food that I want to eat day by day. After eating we go to the cafe which is on the first floor in my company. and we enjoy taling to each other.
담당강사	Wynston2	등록일	2014-10-16
첨삭 내용	We usually have an hour for lunch break from 11:30 to 12:30. Since there are too many people to eat lunch at one time in my company, so EACH FLOOR OF WORKERS HAVE LUNCH ~~we divided with floors~~ 15 minutes apart. Anyway, I usually eat lunch with my coworkers in FROM my department. There are 9 people in my project. Actually I am a new employee, so I still hard talk with my seniors so I always listen to their saying and only I can do is react to them. On the first and second basement there is company cafeteria. The cafeteria is really big to enjoy various food including Korean food, Italian food, Vietnam, chineese, Japaneese and so on. So, I can choose many type of food that I want to eat day by day. After eating we go to the cafe which is on the first floor in my company. and we enjoy taling to each other. ============================================================ DURING EACH WORK DAY, I AND 9 OTHER FELLOW CO-WORKERS FROM MY DEPARTMENT USUALLY HAVE AN HOUR FOR LUNCH, FROM 11:30 TO 12:30. ***NOT FINISHED ...