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제목 [My impressive baseball game] 등록일 2014-10-17
내용 I can exaclty remember the game which is unforgettable. It was more than 15 years ago,
especially when I was in high school. In one sunday, I and some of my friends decided to play
baseball game but we were only 10, and there was no proper place either. Thus we wandered for a while and finally found out some small abandoned yard. I agreed to playing there. Because there were only 10 members, we had to play minimized game for each team with 5 members. My were at defense position and I was a pitcher. I tried to throw fastball as fast as I could. I wanted to show off. But at the first pitching, my plan went wrong. I lost my controll and the ball deviated from the right couse. It directly hit the window of an adjacent house and then the window was broken. All of us out of mind. We went to the house for apologizing but the owner of the house was not there. Actually we had not done such things but at that time we were very scared,
담당강사 Charlanna2 등록일 2014-10-21
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To this day, I can still remember the most unforgettable sports game I ever played. It was a sports game, I played more than 15 years ago. I was a highschool student at the time. One Sunday, some of my friends and I decided to play a game of baseball. While we decided to play baseball, there were only 10 of us and no baseball field. Thus, we wandered around until we found a small abandonded yard. We all agreed on playing our baseball game in this yard. Since there were only 10 of us total, we divided ourselves into 2 groups of 5. My team played defense, and I was the pitcher for our team. When it was time for me to pitch, I tried to throw a fastball because I wanted to show off. However, my plan went completely wrong. Instead of pitching a fastball, I lost control and the ball broke the window of an adjacent house. All of us went out of our minds. We ran over to the house, so we could apologize for the broken window. However, the home owner was not home. We had never before done such a thing, so we were very scared.

 

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