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제목 Review 등록일 2014-10-19
내용 The topic is interesting and it seems to be meaninful to Malaysian. However, introduction and literature review should be revised. Introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test.

Methodology seems to be sound.

Iimitation and implications should be added.
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2014-10-20
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Hi Sun, happy Monday to you! I hope you had a great weekend and talk to you later.

 

-T. Celine^^ 

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The topic is interesting and it seems to be meaninful to Malaysian. 

>> The topic is interesting and it seems meaningful to Malaysian. 

 

However, introduction and literature review should be revised. 

>> However, the introduction and literature review should be revised. 

 

Introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test. 

>> The introduction needs to be added the problems of current information skill test and importance of information skill test. 

 

Methodology seems to be sound. 

>> Methodology seems was founded.

 

Iimitation and implications should be added.

>> The limitations and implications should be added.

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