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| 제목 | whether2 | 등록일 | 2014-10-20 |
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| 내용 | In winter, we have snowing and people like to go mountain for go sking and boarding. This winter, I purchased season free pass ticket for sking, so i can't wait the winter is coming.. In spring.. we can smell flowers all over the fields and variety of flowers start to bloom at spring, so people usually go picinic and take good pictures with beatiful spring scenes. and summer is really hot and sizzling.. i mean not only temperature is hot, but also people's fashion and wearing is really hot.. people darely exposure part of their bodies and show off their well balanced body during summer season. that's why we love summer.. next summer Im doing exercise harder so im goning to make my body well.. |
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| 담당강사 | Christine1 | 등록일 | 2014-11-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | In winter,it snows a lot and people like to go to the mountain for sking and snow boarding. I have purchased a free pass for sking and I can't wait for winter to arrive. In spring we can smell flowers all over the fields and different types of flowers start blooming during this time. People usually go on picinics and take pictures of the beautiful scenery in spring . Summer is very hot and sizzling; not only is the temperature hot, but people's fashion and clothing are also hot. Some people usually show off their well balanced body during the summer season, that's why I love summer. Next summer I'm going to exercise harder to make my body stronger. |
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