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제목 Watching movies 등록일 2014-10-20
내용 I live various type of movie genres except horror movies.
I extremely hate horror movies.
I don't believe existing of a ghost but after watching this kind of movie I couldn't sleep well because I feel like someone looking at me, and standing behind me.
When I was 15, I have a chance to see a horror movie called 'Under the dark water'
This movie is made from Japan. The story of this movie is a woman and her daughter moved in to the old apartment and there is a girl who died with resentment.
Because of the died girl a woman and her daughter die in the water tank which is located in the rooftop of the apartment.
I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie.
I am very coward at ordinary times so I always turn on the lights when I go to bed.
Without lights I can't fall a sleep.
Therefore after wathing a horror movies this symptom is become worse.
I wish that I could get the courage to watch a whole horror movie without closing my eyes or screaming.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-21
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I lOve various typeS of movie genres except horror movies. IN FACT, I extremely VERY MUCH hate horror movies.  EVEN THOUGH I don't believe IN THE existENCE of a ghostS, but after watching this kind of A HORROR movie I HAVE DIFFICULTY couldn't sleepING well because I feel like someone IS looking at me, and  OR standing behind OR OVER me. When I was 15, I have HAD a chance to see a JAPANESE horror movie called 'Under the Dark Water'. This movie is made from Japan. The story of this movie IT WAS ABOUT a woman and her daughter WHO moved into the AN old apartment WHERE and there is a girl HAD who died with FROM ANGER AND resentment.  Because of The died girl a woman and her daughter dieD in the water tank which is located in the rooftop of the apartment, AND THEIR DEATH WAS BROUGHT BY THE GHOST.  I was afraid of the images and the sounds from that movie. NORMALLY I am very coward  FRIGHTENED, at ordinary times so AND FOR THIS REASON I always turn on the lights when I go to bed. Without lights I can't fall a sleep. Therefore after wathing a horror movies this symptom is become worse. I wish that I could get the courage to watch a whole horror movie without closing my eyes or screaming.

 

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