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제목 | Recent exeperiance while watching movie | 등록일 | 2014-10-20 |
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내용 | Three months ago, I watched a movie with my wife at my home. I wanted to enjoy an exciting movie to relieve her stress. I decided to watch movie called “The wolf of wall street.” Because this movie is directed by Martin Scorsese. He is famous director. And main actor is Leonardo Dicaprio. He is my favorite actor. I was already watching the trailer, and I became aware of this movie is based on the real story of Jordan Belfort. Movie was exciting. It showed how to Jordan Belfort did wealthy stock-broker and he fell into the criminal. But I got one mistake. I didn’t consider my wife was pregnant. Movie had too many scenes about abusing drug and sexual contents. After watched, I knew this movie is recorded for the most uses of the word, "fuck". (from wikipedia, OMG... ) I apologized to my wife and I thought I needed to survey in detail before we were watching the movie. |
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담당강사 | Audrey | 등록일 | 2014-10-21 |
첨삭 내용 | James,
It’s me again!^^, Hurray! The last movie that I’ve watch is entitled ‘Her.’ But I don’t want to talk about it because the story is just too sad. So instead, let me introduce you to my favorite movie and that is About Time. It is a romantic comedy-drama film about a young man who can time travel and who tries to change his past to improve his future. If I am not mistaken it starred Rachel McAdams and Domhnall Gleeson. I love this movie because it talks about family, love and seeking every moment and time that you have. I hope someday you could watch it with your wife. Oh my! Oh my! I’m writing so many things again. So I’ll end this letter now and I’ll tell you more about my other favorite movies in my next replies. I’ll see you again later! Take care!^^,
P.S. I’ve leave you with my favorite quote from the movie and here it goes; We're all travelling through time together every day of our lives. All we can do is do our best to relish this remarkable ride.
Lots of love, Audrey.
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Three months ago, I watched a movie with my wife at my home. >> Correct.
I wanted to enjoy an exciting movie to relieve her stress. >> I wanted to enjoy an exciting movie and help my wife to release stress.
I decided to watch movie called “The wolf of wall street.” >> So, I decided to watch the movie ‘The Wolf of Wall Street’.
Because this movie is directed by Martin Scorsese. >> I chose this movie because it was directed by Martin Scorsese.
He is famous director. And main actor is Leonardo Dicaprio. >> He is a famous director and also, it main character will be played by Leonardo DiCaprio.
He is my favorite actor. >> Like what I’ve mentioned before, he is my favorite actor.
I was already watching the trailer, and I became aware of this movie is based on the real story of Jordan Belfort. >> In addition, I’ve heard in the trailer that this movie is based on the life of Jordan Belford.
Movie was exciting. It showed how to Jordan Belfort did wealthy stock-broker and he fell into the criminal. >> The movie was exciting. It showed how Jordan Belford came from rags to riches then to rags again and became a criminal.
But I got one mistake. I didn’t consider my wife was pregnant. >> However, I forgot to consider one thing before watching the film, and that is my wife was pregnant during that time.
Movie had too many scenes about abusing drug and sexual contents. >> The movie was great but it has too many drug abuse and sexual scenes.
After watched, I knew this movie is recorded for the most uses of the word, "fuck". (from wikipedia, OMG... ) I >> Also, I then figure out (from Wikipedia) that this movie has the most usage of the word ‘fuck’ in any movie in the past. OMG!
apologized to my wife and I thought I needed to survey in detail before we were watching the movie. >> I truly apologize to my wife and I guess I need to read movie reviews before watching a particular movie.
************Well, I’ve heard a lot of great reviews about the film. Unfortunately, I haven’t seen it yet. Hu! Hu! Hu! TT-TT On the other hand, if I have a chance then I definitely check it out!^^, Thanks for introducing this movie to me!^-^ |