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| 제목 | My favorite music 2 | 등록일 | 2014-10-23 |
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| 내용 | When listening, I feel like standing in a big forest or big grand mountain. I feel deep valley, wild waves of water, cool wind sounds and birds sounds. This is the reason why I stick to the song. I recommend to listen this piano music through internet or Utuve. You can find out whether my comment is overstated or not. | ||
| 담당강사 | Charlanna2 | 등록일 | 2014-10-24 |
| 첨삭 내용 | When I'm listening to this song, I feel like I'm standing in a big forest or on top of a grand mountain. It's almost like I can hear wild waves of water, a cool wind blowing and birds chirping. This is the reason why I stick to this song. I recommend that everyone listen to this song; it can be located on the internet or Youtube. Listening to the song will enable you to confirm if my opinion is valid. |
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