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제목 Excercise 등록일 2014-10-27
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I was into tennis over 10 years when I was young. But I am not doing it anymore.
Now I like to go trekking. Before I was into trekking, I didn't understand that people go to mountains. Because you are end up down the mountain, it looks non-sense walking hardly up mountain.
At that time, I thought that mountain exists just being looked at by people.
But I realized that mountain is the perfect place for physical and mind.
Koreans go trekking with many foods and drinks in their back pack. They sweat a lot, but get the stress out of their mind, and drink with their friends at the top of the mountain. They feel freedom from their daily choirs and company problems. Same to me.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-10-28
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I was into tennis over 10 years when I was youngER but I am not doing THAT anymore. Now I like to go trekking. Before I was into trekking, I didn't understand WHY people go WENT to THE mountains. IT DID NOT APPEAR TO MAKE SENCE TO ME THAT IF A PERSON IS ALREADY AT THE FOOT OF THE MOUNTAIN, WHY BOTHER TO CLIMB IT? Because you are end up down the mountain, it looks non-sense walking hardly up mountain. At that time, I thought that mountainS existED FOR SIGHTSEEING, UNTIL  just being looked at by people. But I EVENTUALLY realized that mountain UP THERE, is the perfect place for physical and PEACE OF mind. Koreans go trekking with many LOTS OF foods and drinks in their backpack. They sweat a lot, ARE ABLE TO RELIEVE but get theIR stress. out of their mind, and drink with their friends at the top of the mountain. They feel freedom from their daily CHORES and company problems. THAT IS HOW I FEEL.  Same to me.

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