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제목 Staying at home during vacations 등록일 2014-10-27
내용 I think lazy people like to stay at home.
The benefit of staying at home is not worring about making any plan.
Sometimes I think I am tired, I stay home.
I like watching TV, I can watch old movies in some cable TVs.
Or I can watch some movies from internet.
Sometimes I watch DVD American TV series like "Lost" from moring to night.
I can play baduk game through internet. I can sleep 2 to 3 hours at home.
When I think staying at home is meaningless and I am lazy, I try to go outside. Sometimes I walk about 2 to 3 hours besides Han River. Sometimes go some suburban area near Seoul in the morning and come back in the evening.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-27
첨삭 내용

I think lazy people like to stay at home. The benefit of staying at home is not worrYing about making any planS. Sometimes I think I am tired, SO I stay home. I like watching TV, I can  AND watch old movies in some OVER cable TVs. Or, I can watch some movies from OVER THE  internet. Sometimes I watch DVD American TV series like "Lost" from moring to night. I can play baduk game through internet. I can sleep 2 to 3 hours at home. When I think staying at home is meaningless and I am lazy, I try to go outside. Sometimes I walk about 2 to 3 hours besides Han River. Sometimes go some suburban area near Seoul in the morning and come back in the evening.

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