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| 제목 | Cooking | 등록일 | 2014-10-28 |
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| 내용 | Now, As we have the Internet, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through SNS. I write the post on my Facebook about when and where the dinner will be. Also, when I am in a hurry, I make a chat room on Kakaotalk which is the most famous SNS in Korea. As a matter of fact, I always try to make a delicious dish to my friends but I am a bad cook. However, The only thing I can make is Kimchizigae, which is Korean traditional soup. As I told you before this is the only thing that I can make so, the reaction of my friends also really good. Even more if they get a chance my dish, they would gennerally crazy about my dish and want to eat more. Sincerely last weekend I made Kimchizigae for my friend, minji. After eating she also satisfied with my dish. So, I decided I will learn more about how to cook the other dishes for my friends. |
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| 담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-10-29 |
| 첨삭 내용 | NowADAYS as we have the Internet, I usually invite my friends to dinner at my house through SNS. I write the post on my Facebook about when and where the dinner will be. Also, when I am in a hurry, I make a chat room on Kakaotalk which is the most famous SNS in Korea. As a matter of fact, I always try to make a delicious dish FOR my friends but I am a bad cook. However, The only thing I can make is Kimchizigae, which is A Korean traditional soup. As I told you before, this is the only thing that I can make so, the reaction of my friends IS also really good. Even EXCELLENT! |
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