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제목 | Jogging | 등록일 | 2014-10-28 |
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내용 | Dear Wynston Mr.Wynston. I heard that you are jogging as fast as or more fast than younger people. Even more stunning myself was that you are sixty years old man. It was a surprise because I could feel energy from your voice that could not be experienced generally from other people around your age. Even I reminded hollywood super stars who stay in good shape. You know, I drink often and smoke over twenty years. Nowadays, I think I am taking good influences from you like values for health, life and happiness. I think I need to change. My best regards, Jongmoo Lee. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Dear Wynston Mr.Wynston. ============================================== *** JAMES --- I DIDN'T CORRECT IT INITIALLY, BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT WAS A PERSONAL LETTER TO ME, AND DID NOT WANT TO ALTER THE ORIGINAL THOUGHTS YOU WERE ATTEMPTING TO CONVEY. ***James, I very much appreciate your vote of confidence. I too smoked for 18 years, and then quit since 1984. I an pleased that I can be a positive influence to you. When the time arrives ... you will know within your heart it is the right time to make a change for health! Best regards ... Wynston |