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제목 | Internet | 등록일 | 2014-10-30 |
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내용 | For me, saying with exaggeration, internet is my life. Everyday I look up news from internet, and check mails from my company internet. When I work, sometimes search and search some work related items. When I bought personal desktop computer in 1999, at that time most Korean people don't have personal computer in their home, my wife liked internet very much. She searched internet a lot of times, made some tutoring materials. I sometimes go to baduk site. I play baduk game or watch baduk game. I can download movies and watch. My two sons use internet for searching material and do their homework, or some game. Mostly internet can do harm for children, cause children use internet just for games. But in this case, proper discipline is needed for them, for example you can use internet one hour in a day. |
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담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2015-05-29 |
첨삭 내용 | For me, saying with exaggeration, internet is my life. Everyday I look up for some news from internet, and check mails from my company internet. When I work, I sometimes search and search for some work related items. When I bought my personal desktop computer in 1999, at that time most Korean people don't have personal computer in their home, my wife liked internet very much. She searched over the internet a lot of times, made some tutoring materials. I sometimes go to baduk site. I play baduk game or watch baduk game. I can download movies and watch. My two sons use the internet for searching materials and do their homework, or some game. Mostly, internet can do harm for children, cause children use internet just for games. But in this case, proper discipline is needed for them, for example they can only use the internet one hour in a day. |