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제목 Bank 등록일 2014-11-06
내용 Banks can be a best friend for living in many cases, but it would be your painful burden if you do not make a plan.
Nowadays, most of the koreans who have a house are getting pains for their debt for banks.
In the mid of 2000s years, the price of korean mortgage had grow to the rocket high every day.
And now, It is going down and the situation that the owners can't pay back to the banks about their debt come out.
Even the interest rate is very low in these days, it seems that people are reluctant to borrow more debt from banks.
If you would like to be a rich, you have to know the use of banks.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-11-07
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Banks can be a best friend for living SITUATIONS in many cases, but it would be your A VERY painful burden if you A PERSON doES not make a plan. Nowadays, most of the Koreans who have a house are getting pains FRUSTRATED ON ACCOUNT OF for their debt for WITH banks. In the mid of 2000's, years, the price of Korean mortgageS had grow to the SKYrocketED high every day. And now, ALTHOUGH PRICES HAVE BEGUN TO LOWER, PEOPLE CONTINUE TO HAVE DIFFICULTY PAYING BACK THEIR DEBTS. It is going down and the situation that the owners can't pay back to the banks about their debt come out. Even AS the interest rateS ARE is very low in these days, it seems that people are reluctant to borrow more debt MONEY from THE banks. If you would like to be a rich, you have to know the use of banks.

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