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제목 | My favorite place. | 등록일 | 2014-11-07 |
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내용 | Someone give me qestion. If you have a lot of money, what do you want to do? If I have enough money and time, I want to go around world everywhere. Not buy the car, the house, etc.. I want to go uyuni dsert in Bolivia, and Iguazu Falls in Brazil and so on. I was travle many place like Ezypt, Turkey, China, Europ. but I want more. I think Earth have many beatiful and great place. Now I'm young and heathy. So I want to go many other place as much as I can. |
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담당강사 | Beth | 등록일 | 2014-11-11 |
첨삭 내용 | Someone
Hello Hana, Thank you for this great composition and for telling me about your travels overseas. I want to go to many places as well while I'm still young. I've checked Iguazu Falls and it's beautiful but since I'm scared of water, I prefer going to Uyuni Desert instead. Well again, thank you for this. -Beth- ^_^
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