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제목 I'm sorry 등록일 2014-11-10
내용 Hi~ Bree Teather

I'm very sorry I missed your call.
I get up late this morning.
Fortunately, I get to work on time.
Again, I am sincerely sorry.

Have a nice day!
See you tomorrow.
담당강사 Bree 등록일 2014-11-11
첨삭 내용

Dear Sarah,

Good morning to you. It's okay. It's good to hear you're doing fine. Your letter is good. But let's try to make it even better.

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Hi Teacher Bree,

I'm very sorru for missing your call. I woke up late this morning. Fortunately, I made it to work on time. Once again, I'm very sorry. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow!

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Much better? I know you can make it more pertfectly next time. Have a great day.

Bree

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