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제목 | I'm sorry | 등록일 | 2014-11-10 |
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내용 | Hi~ Bree Teather I'm very sorry I missed your call. I get up late this morning. Fortunately, I get to work on time. Again, I am sincerely sorry. Have a nice day! See you tomorrow. |
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담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-11-11 |
첨삭 내용 | Dear Sarah, Good morning to you. It's okay. It's good to hear you're doing fine. Your letter is good. But let's try to make it even better. ---- Hi Teacher Bree, I'm very sorru for missing your call. I woke up late this morning. Fortunately, I made it to work on time. Once again, I'm very sorry. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow! ---- Much better? I know you can make it more pertfectly next time. Have a great day. Bree |