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My favorite shopping mall is the “Home Plus” where is close to my house.

-> My favorite shopping mall is the Home Plus where which is close to my house.

It takes about 10 minute by walk from my house.

-> It takes about 10 minutes by walk on foot from my place house.

It is not only very large, but also quite modern. -good

It is brand new 5-story building.

-> It is a brand new 5-story building.

As soon as I arrived there, I can find food court and go to the second floor, I can see grocery store.

-> As soon as I arrived there, I can could find a food court. and go to

On the second floor, I can also see find a grocery store.

Also there are many other stores such as electronics, furniture.

-> Also There are also many other stores such as electronics shop, furniture shop, etc.

In addition, it has very spacious free parking-lot and very kind staffs.

-> In addition, it the mall has a very spacious and free parking-lot and with very kind staffs.

I usually go shopping with my family on weekends.

Because I am busy working on weekdays.

-> I usually go shopping with my family on weekends because I am busy working on weekdays.

From time to time, we would have dinner at the food court after shopping. -good

I think that it is good place to go shopping and spend time with my family.-good

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Hi. A shopping mall is one of the best places for us to unwind and to have a great tim with our family and friends. We can do a lot things when we are at the mall. I am glad that you actually enjoy doing it. Going to the mall has been a part of the lives of Filipinos like me. We enjoy doing things at the mall. Hope you'll fun the next the time you visit it!