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제목 essay 등록일 2014-11-19
내용 I think koreans are tend to be kind to western people rather than asian like japanese or chinese.
It seems that the tendency originated from our tough times with the neighbor contries historically.
But we had big helps from western countries during and after the Korean War.
Also I think koreans have a big yearn for living rich and strong like western countries even we rank the top ten trade scale in the world.
I think this yearning will be last until we overcome western countries.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-11-20
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I think Koreans are tend to be kind to westernIZE people rather than REMAIN INDIGINEOUS TO THEIR OWN RACE AND CULTURE SUCH AS asian like THE Japanese or Chinese. It seems that the THIS tendency IS ROOTED IN originated from our tough times AND CONFLICTS with the neighborING coUntries historically. But we had big helps from western countries during and after the Korean War. Also I think koreans have a big yearn for living rich and strong like western countries even we rank the top ten trade scale in the world. I think this yearning will be last until we overcome western countries.

 

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