[c o r r e c t i o n]

There are few website which I often visite every day.

-> There are few websites which I often visite every day.

Among them, my favorite website is Naver.

When I want to find about something, I usually visit this website. -good

I can easily find out what I’m wondering and quickly see the latest news.

-> I can easily find out what I’m wondering about and quickly see the latest news.

Also I can watch a movie or listen to music.

-> Also I can also  watch a movie or listen to music in Naver.

The most useful feature of the various functions provided by this website is “Naver MAP”.

-> The most useful feature of from the various functions provided by this website is the Naver Map.

I'm always a destination to go out and checked using the 'Naver MAP'.

-> I'm can always a go to my  destination to go out and checked using the Naver Map by Then I can savinge my time and effort.

Over all, this website must be very useful to me.

-> Over all, this website must be is very useful to me.

I can’t suppose to live without this site.

-> I can’t supposed to live without this site.

[c o m m e n t]

Great work! In our present generation. people actually live with internet. We can all do thing easier thanks to the this kind of masterpiece. Without this, I guess our lives will be harder. Good thing, some people  use internet not to harm others but for the positive one,