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| 제목 | Unit 22 - Gambling | 등록일 | 2014-11-26 |
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| 내용 | I don't like gambling. My major is Statistics, so I believe a magic of probability. I think most events have a probability, so we should see the situation deeply and forecast the result. If we do that continually, it is not a gamble anymore. Therefore, I think the person like gambling has a anxiety about future. If they like changing their future environment their own mind, they don't feel gambling is funny. Because future is certain. Therefore, my conclusion is that it is OK they play gambling once a while, But gambling is not good basically. | ||
| 담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-11-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I don't like gambling. My major is Statistics, so I believe a magic of probability. I think most events have a probability, so we should see the situation deeply and forecast the result. If we do that continually, it is not a gamble anymore. Therefore, I think the person WHO likeS gambling has aN anxiety about THE future. If they like changing their future environment their own mind, they don't feel gambling is funny. (*** I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS STATEMENT) Because future is certain. ***(IS THE FUTURE REALLY CERTAIN?? Therefore, my conclusion is that it is OK |
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