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제목 | sports | 등록일 | 2014-12-08 |
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내용 | hi Same as usual. How about you? we have snow in early morning. it is getting colder and totally i think winter comes here. on sunday, I went to the public library with my family which is called a forest of wisdom. it was built by publisher association and many books has donated by scholars such as professors and scientists. we were gonna to read books which my family choosed for afternoon but my son was tired of reading book after 1 hour. he might like to spend on times by walking around th library and reading comic books. I thought he have to finised his homework until we go home and i foced him to do homework. he was very angary with me. i was also uneasy. it is difficult for me to act as parents. i wanna talk about sports. how about you? when i was young. i have no telnet for sports. I didn't like to play sports and to watch sports game on tv or stadium. let me ask you something which is correct stntence play sports or do sports? what's different between them? anyway one day i liked sports suddenly. I don't know what is exact reason. when i learned how to ski, i skied more well as times went by. maybe it made me to be interested to play other sports. since that time, I have tried to learn how to play sports but i don't play sports very well. i think enjoy is more better than play well. what do you think of it ? which is your favorite sports? |
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담당강사 | Emily2 | 등록일 | 2014-12-10 |
첨삭 내용 | Hello, How are you? It snowed early this morning. It is getting colder and I totally think winter has come. On sunday, I went to the public library with my family which is called a Forest of Wisdom. It was built by a publisher association and many books were donated by scholars such as professors and scientists. We were going to read books which my family chose for the afternoon but my son was tired of reading books after 1 hour. He likes to spend time walking around th library and reading comic books. I thought he had finised his homework until we got home. I forced him to do his homework. He was very angry with me. I was also uneasy. It is difficult for me to act as a parent. I want to talk about sports. Do you like sports? When I was young I had no talent for sports. I didn't like to play sports or to watch sports on tv or at the stadium. Let me ask you something, which is correct, play sports or do sports? What's the difference between them? Anyway, one day I liked sports suddenly. I don't know the exact reason. When I learned how to ski, I skied better as time went by. Maybe it made me interested in playing other sports. Since that time, I have tried to learn how to play sports but i don't play sports very well. I think I enjoy watching more than I enjoy playing . What do you think? What are your favorite sports? |