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| 제목 | Unit 27 - Basketball | 등록일 | 2014-12-14 |
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| 내용 | I played basketball when I was a student. At that time, my friend and I played basketball in school playground. Korean students usually are stressed by test score, so they solve the stresses by playing sports with friends. These days I watch basketball on TV broadcast once a week. I don't like basketball much, but when I have a spare time, I sometimes watch it. But I don't have a experience that I go to the stadium. There is no basketball stadium in my city. | ||
| 담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-12-15 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I played basketball when I was a student. At that time, my friend and I played basketball in THE school playground. Korean students usually are stressed by test scoreS, so they solve the stresses by playing sports with friends. These days I watch basketball on TV broadcast once a week. I don't like basketball much, but when I have
***WELL WRITTEN JUN, YOUR WRTIING IS IMPROVING, PARTICULARLY YOUR GRAMMAR, AS THIS PARAGRAPH SUGGESTS. |
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