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제목 Parents 등록일 2015-01-07
내용 My appearance look like my father. But my characters are look like my mother.
Nowadays I feel I love my mother than before. When I was young I fought a lot with my mother.
But now I talk a lot with mom, and I give many hug to her.
It seems that because I realized and really thanked to my mother's love, as I am getting old.
I didn't have many talks with my father. Because he did not talk a lot.
But I know he's love also. When I was in the army service at the front base to North Korea, he visited our camp on weekends at least once a month with delicious and healthy foods made in home.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2015-01-08
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My appearance is like my father, but my characteristic is are look like my mother. Nowadays, I feel I love my mother more than before. When I was young, I fought a lot with my mother. But now I talk a lot with my mom, and I give many hugs (pl) to her. It seems I realize and am really thankful for my mother's love  that because and really thanked to my mother's love, as I am getting old. I didn't have many talks with my father because he did not talk a lot. But I know he loved me also. When I was in the army service at the front base to North Korea, he visited our camp on weekends at least once a month with delicious and healthy foods made in at home.

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The phrase "I look like" means "My appearance is like"
-My daughter looks like my sister.
-My daughter's appearance is like my sister.

Your family sounds comforting. I hope my family and my children will love me like you love your mom.

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