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제목 To wake up early every morning 등록일 2015-01-13
내용 Hi Emily

Not Bad. Today is warmer day than yesterday.

Yesterday, I was at living room and my phone was at my room.
So I couldn't catch your call.

When you called me, I was looking at the new device for my son to study with.
It was something like computer for education.
My wife applied for 2 weeks trial use event and she got chance to use the device free.
It was delivered to my house yesterday.

I don't want to go to the gym. That's because I'm tired.
Yesterday, I exercised harder than usual days.

I can't explain exactly why I excised too much.
I just want to achieve my goal which was running on the treadmill for 30 minutes at level 6.
and lift weights to build muscle it has gone on a dieat.
The machine told I burned off 300 calories and off the fat.
but when I got home, I was very hungry and I had too much.
Yesterday Hard excercise was useless.

Anyway last year, I decided to go to the gym in every morning.
Because I thought l would have many things to do such as appointment with my friend or co walker after work. and it will be good way to refresh my mind before begaing my work.
But It is very hard for me to awake up early every morning.

Everyday I set alarm at 6 o'clok am and wake up to release alarm and go to sleep for about 1 hour.
This sleep is very delicious to me.
Anyway So Spring comes here. I will get up at 6 and go to the gym.

So I think You are great. I know You get up early every morning to do work.
Can I ask how to awake up early?
담당강사 Emily2 등록일 2015-01-15
첨삭 내용

Hi Emily,

I'm not bad. How are you? Today is a warmer day than yesterday. Yesterday, I was in the living room and my phone was in my bedroom so I couldn't catch your call. I was looking at a new device for my son to study with. It's a computer for education. My wife applied for a two week trial and she got a chance to use the device for free. It was delivered to my house yesterday. I don't want to go to the gym. It's because I'm tired. Yesterday, I exercised harder than usual.  I can't explain exactly why I excised so much. I just want to achieve my goal which is running on the treadmill for 30 minutes at level 6 and to be able to lift weights so I can build the muscle that I lost from going on a diet. The machine said I burned off 300 calories but when I got home I was very hungry and I ate too much. As a result, yesterdays hard work was worthless. Anyway, last year, I decided to go to the gym every morning because I thought l would have many things to do after work such as plans with my friends and coworkers. I thought is would be a good way to refresh my mind before beginning work. But it is very hard for me to wake up early every morning. Everyday I set an alarm for six a.m.   I push the snooze button on the alarm and go back to sleep for about an hour. This sleep is very satisfying. Anyway, spring is coming. I will get up at six and go to the gym. I think you are great. I know you get up early every morning to go to work. Can I ask how you wake up so early?

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