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제목 Lunar New Year's Day is one of the biggest of the year in Korea 등록일 2015-01-29
내용 In accordance with the lunar calendar, this year is the of the blue sheep!

We call this day to gu-jung to distinguish from new year's day in a solar calendar

When it is Lunar New Year, We used to visit ours hometown, and meet parents and relative.

and prepare festive dishes for the New Year, perform ancestral rites with dishes.

and have a meal together. and pass it on each other's news.

especially, childern like Lunar New Year's day!!

that'reason is that they receive money from relative if they give a bow of Lunar New Year's day!!
담당강사 Belle 등록일 2015-01-29
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In accordance with the lunar calendar, this year is the of the blue sheep!  this year is the year of the blue sheep.

We called this day to gu-jung to distinguish acknowledge from the new year's day in a solar lunar calendar

When it is Lunar New Year, We we used to visit ours our hometown, and meet parents and relative. meet the parents and relatives and prepare festive dishes for the New Year,

perform ancestral rites with dishes and have having a meal together and pass it on each other's news. especially, childern children's like Lunar New Year's day!!

that'the reason is, that they receive money from relatives if they give a bow of vow to Lunar New Year's day!!

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