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제목 | self-introcuction | 등록일 | 2015-02-02 |
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내용 | I grew up as the second of four children and only a gril. I was very independent. And When I got to school, I was active in literary circles. I have read a lot of books, I was impressed. I most memorable book is The Great Gatsby. This book is a love stroy of a man. After all, the man did not get the love. But I have been a big impression on the man's innocence. I usually read two books a month. I read a book at lunch time at work, read in a subway commute. That's all. |
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담당강사 | Christine1 | 등록일 | 2015-02-03 |
첨삭 내용 | I am the second child of four children, and I am the only girl. I was very independent when I was growing up. When I was in college, I was very active in the literary circle. I have read many books, and my most memorable and most impressive book wasThe Great Gatsby. This book is a love story of a man's love deficit. After all he did, he did not get the love he needed because his dream of Daisy was corrupted by money and dishonesty, and the so called American dream of individualism and happiness was translated into the pursuit of wealth. “Gatsby power to transform his dream into reality is what makes him great.”I have a big impression of the man's innocence. I usually read two books a month. I read a book at lunch time, one at work, and read one while commuting on the subway. That's all. |