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제목 Commercials 등록일 2015-02-03
내용 I know there are 3B in commercials. That means baby, beauty, and beast.
Because everybody likes them, the commercials showing them almost always works.
I remember the commercial that a few women show the feeling of sexual satisfaction.
I was a little bit startled because the little kids also would see the commercial.
But in the end, the beauties end up eating delicious food.
It was a ad-maker's clever trick.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2015-02-04
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I know there are 3Bs in commericals: baby, beauty, and beast.
Because verybody likes them, the commercials showing them almost always work. (no -S)
I remember a commerical where a few women showed a feeling of sexual satisfaction.
I was a little bit startled because little kids would also see the commercial.
But in the end, the beauties ended up eating delicious food.
It was the ad-maker's clever trick.

American commercials tend to be really risky like that. But in Germany there's nudity in commercials and posters which was so surprising for me! I feel really embarassed when these types of commercials play on TV. I can't imagine having my son or dad next to me in that situation.

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