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| 제목 | My project | 등록일 | 2015-02-09 |
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| 내용 | As a computer programmer, my job is to manage application and identify needs of customers. The project I worked on last month was modifying an online web page. I was in charge of manage promotion module in web page, and had to make sure we meet customer needs I worked with my co-workers who showed a cooperative attitude. The deadline was very tight So we didn’t have enough time, but we kept the deadline at last. We worked day and night for two weeks. After finishing the project, I was really happy and relieved. |
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| 담당강사 | Abby | 등록일 | 2015-02-11 |
| 첨삭 내용 | As a computer programmer, my job is to manage the application and identify needs of customers. The project I worked on last month was modifying an online web page. I was in charge of managing the promotion module in web page, and had to make sure we meet customer needs. I worked with my co-workers who showed a cooperative attitude. The deadline was very tight. So we didn’t have enough time, but we kept the deadline at last. We worked day and night for two weeks. After finishing the project, I was really happy and relieved. __________________________________
Hello! It was a great entry. Congratlations for the success of the project! Take care! Abby |
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