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제목 | Last weekend 2 | 등록일 | 2015-02-09 |
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내용 | Sunday, I had to go to mom's home. Because She has been sick for 4 weeks since She had her right arm broken. and serval days ago, She got cold. She said Sometimes Her temperature rose suddenly and it mad her hard. I got up almost 10 o'clock am because I went to the bed at 2 o'clock AM. It was too late to go to mom's house but I had to go. When my mom saw me, She was very surprised and looked happy. I thought I did good job. After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at 9 o'clock PM and I had to drive for 5 hours. It was hard to wait for this class. |
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담당강사 | Emily2 | 등록일 | 2015-02-10 |
첨삭 내용 | On Sunday I had to go to my mom's home because she has been sick since she broke her arm four weeks ago. She got a cold serval days ago. She said her temperature would sometimes rise suddenly and it made her feel bad. I got up around ten A.M. because I went to the bed at two A.M. It was too late to go to my mom's house but I went anyway. When my mom saw me, she was very surprised and looked happy. I thought I did a good job. After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at nine P.M. I had to drive for five hours. It was hard to wait for this class. |