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제목 Last weekend 2 등록일 2015-02-09
내용 Sunday, I had to go to mom's home.
Because She has been sick for 4 weeks since She had her right arm broken.
and serval days ago, She got cold.
She said Sometimes Her temperature rose suddenly and it mad her hard.
I got up almost 10 o'clock am because I went to the bed at 2 o'clock AM.
It was too late to go to mom's house but I had to go.
When my mom saw me, She was very surprised and looked happy.
I thought I did good job.
After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at 9 o'clock PM and I had to drive for 5 hours.
It was hard to wait for this class.
담당강사 Emily2 등록일 2015-02-10
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On Sunday I had to go to my mom's home because she has been sick since she broke her arm four weeks ago. She got a cold serval days ago. She said her temperature would sometimes rise suddenly and it made her feel bad. I got up around ten A.M. because I went to the bed at two A.M. It was too late to go to my mom's house but I went anyway. When my mom saw me, she was very surprised and looked happy. I thought I did a good job. After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at nine P.M.  I had to drive for five hours. It was hard to wait for this class.

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