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제목 | SNS | 등록일 | 2015-02-10 |
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내용 | Hi, Christine1 I like most Facebook. I write my story and post potos on Facebook. I write on Facebook that I want to say and to inform to my freind. and If I have new information, I write on Facebook. Because good news and information is that I want to share with eveyone. In addition, I upload photos of friends, my pictures on Facebook. I can see what they are up to thest day. I still keep in touch with my ex-coworker. I think that I have read various articles on the Facebook, I can be seen that new facts. Face book is an excellent way to make more personal connection. Have a good day! Bye!! |
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담당강사 | Christine1 | 등록일 | 2015-02-11 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi, Christine the SNS that I like the most is Facebook. I usually write stories that are usually composed of what I want to say and communicate to my friends, and post them on Facebook. I also upload photos and share with my friends. If I have new information, I always post it on Facebook because I like to share good news and information with everyone. In addition, I sometimes upload photos of my friends’on Facebook so that I can see what they are up to. I still keep in touch with my ex-coworker VIA Facebook. I have read various articles on Facebook, and I can obtain new facts and information. Face book is an excellent way to make more personal connection. Have a good day! Bye!! |