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| 제목 | unit 18 leaking problem | 등록일 | 2015-02-16 |
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| 내용 | 1. leak if housewife turns on the water tap without sotpping, lots of water will leak on the floor 2. sink it is very difficult to pull uo the sunken ship above water 3. perish after big fire brought out in mountain, many wild lives were perished 4. seal when someone send post, they don't forger the seal of the post 5. continuous continuous typing would bring out physical disorder 6. brought my wife brought chocolate box to me to celebrate balentine day |
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| 담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2015-02-17 |
| 첨삭 내용 | 1. leak if housewife turns on the water tap without sotpping, lots of water will leak on the floor IF MY WIFE DOESN'T TURN THE TAP OFF, WATER WILL LEAK ONTO THE FLOOR 2. sink it is very difficult to pull uo the sunken ship above water IT IS VERY DIFFICULT TO SINK LARGE SHIPS 3. perish after big fire brought out in mountain, many wild lives were perished MANY PEOPLE WILL PERISH IF THEY GET CAUGHT IN THE MOUNTAIN FIRE 4. seal when someone send post, they don't forger the seal of the post WHEN SENDING MAIL, REMEMBER TO SEAL THE ENVELOP 5. continuous continuous typing would bring out physical disorder CONTNUOUS TYPING COULD CAUSE ACHING FINGERS 6. brought my wife brought chocolate box to me to celebrate balentine day MY WIFE BROUGHT HOME SOME CHOCOLATE TO CELEBRATE VALENTINE'S DAY WITH ME |
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