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제목 | last day of January | 등록일 | 2015-02-27 |
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내용 | Hi, Love it is already the last day of this month. Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream. It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things. An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup. It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you? |
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담당강사 | Love | 등록일 | 2015-03-02 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi, Love it is already the last day of this month. Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream. It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things. An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup. It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you?
========================================== -> Firstly, to eat ice cream people -> In hot summer, the dishes are sometimes unwashed. -> Oh, I dont want to imagine such things. -> An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with waffle. -> He rolled a warm waffle in a shape of a cone. -> It was the origin of ice cream. Very interesting, isn't it? ================================================== Hi James, Thank you for your composition and for sharing some information about the origin of ice cream and cone. It's really interesting how it was made and I think eating ice cream in a cone is the best. See you next time James! enjoy your weekend!
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