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제목 | Self Intorduction | 등록일 | 2015-03-10 |
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내용 | I think I was a optimistic and outgoing person that liked to meet people and talk with them. I also seemed to be a very talkitive and not to think something more serious. Especially I didn't like to write anything such as reports, essaies, letters and etc. I had a tend to think a conclusion hurrily or to ignore the procedures about 2 - 3 years ago. Because it was convenient to me personally. But these days I think my personailty got changed much. How? I think more seriously something than before for example What happened, Why happened and How can I deliver that circumstances and information well and effciently to my boss or the concerned people. I don't hate to change my personality. because It's fun to analyze my work and incidents to happen. And it gives me a good time to think more serious about something. Thinking... Even though it often gives me a stress to write or report about something, on the contrary I think it gives me a good pleasure about how to think. |
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담당강사 | Love | 등록일 | 2015-03-13 |
첨삭 내용 | I think I was a optimistic and outgoing person that liked to meet people and talk with them. I also seemed to be a very talkitive and not to think something more serious. Especially I didn't like to write anything such as reports, essaies, letters and etc. I had a tend to think a conclusion hurrily or to ignore the procedures about 2 - 3 years ago. Because it was convenient to me personally. But these days I think my personailty got changed much. How? I think more seriously something than before for example What happened, Why happened and How can I deliver that circumstances and information well and effciently to my boss or the concerned people. I don't hate to change my personality. because It's fun to analyze my work and incidents to happen. And it gives me a good time to think more serious about something. Thinking... Even though it often gives me a stress to write or report about something, on the contrary I think it gives me a good pleasure about how to think. ========================================================== -> I think I used to be an optimistic and outgoing person that liked to meet people and talk with them. -> I also seemed to be -> Especially, I didn't like to write anything such as reports, essays, letters, -> About 2 to 3 years ago, I had the tendency to think of conclusions hurriedly or to ignore the procedures. -> However, these days I think my personailty has changed much. -> I think of things more seriously than before. For example, I think of what happened, why it happened and how I can deliver those circumstances and information well and efficiently to my boss or the concerned people. -> I don't mind changing my personality, because it's fun to analyze my work and incidents that happen. -> It also gives me a good time to think more seriously about something. -> Even though it often gives me ================================================== Hi James! Here are some points you should remember:
See you next class James! |