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제목 TGIF ! 등록일 2015-05-08
내용 Today is Friday and parents day in korea.

So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today

I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years.

Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home

I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M and She must be prepare dinner for my family.

I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow.


→ Let's review yesterday lesson
1. I just finished having dinner with my family
2. What day is parent's day in the Philippines ? ( Use a new word)
3. I forgot your teaching last class ( Use a new word : forget )
4. I guess you are good teacher because when you explean me something, it's easy that understanging
담당강사 Kat 등록일 2015-05-08
첨삭 내용

Today is Friday and parents day in korea.

> Today is Friday and parents day in korea. - Today is Friday and Parent's day in Korea.

So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today.

> So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today. - So, I prepared some money for my mother that I will give to her after work.

I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years.

> I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years. -  I always thank my mother who has been taking care of my two daughters for 17 years.

Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M

> Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M - Also, she helps me cook dishes and cleans the house while I'm at work.

 She must be prepare dinner for my family.

>  She must be prepare dinner for my family. - She prepares dinner for my family.

I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow.

> I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow. - I'm going to bed early for tomorrow.

→ Let's review yesterday's lesson

1. I just finished having dinner with my family - Very Good

2. What day is parent's day in the Philippines ? ( Use a new word) - Very Good

3. I forgot your teaching last class ( Use a new word : forget ) - I forgot what you taught me last class.

4. I guess you are good teacher because when you explean me something, it's easy that understanging - I guess you are a good teacher because your expalnation is very understandable.

 

Hi Clara,

Happy Parent's Day!! I was very glad while reading your letter about your mother. You are very lucky to have a very supportive and loving mom. Always tell her how much you love her. :) Talk to you later.

 Teacher Kat

P.S. I corrected some of the sentences that you wrote. Kindly study the corrections I made.

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