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제목 | TGIF ! | 등록일 | 2015-05-08 |
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내용 | Today is Friday and parents day in korea. So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years. Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M and She must be prepare dinner for my family. I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow. → Let's review yesterday lesson 1. I just finished having dinner with my family 2. What day is parent's day in the Philippines ? ( Use a new word) 3. I forgot your teaching last class ( Use a new word : forget ) 4. I guess you are good teacher because when you explean me something, it's easy that understanging |
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담당강사 | Kat | 등록일 | 2015-05-08 |
첨삭 내용 | Today is Friday and parents day in korea. > Today is Friday and parents day in korea. - Today is Friday and Parent's day in Korea. So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today. > So I prepare to some money for my mother gift after work today. - So, I prepared some money for my mother that I will give to her after work. I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years. > I always thanks to my mother who she has been take care of my two daughers for 17 years. - I always thank my mother who has been taking care of my two daughters for 17 years. Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M > Also she helps me cook dishs and clean the house while I out of home I'll go to work tomorrow at 6 A.M - Also, she helps me cook dishes and cleans the house while I'm at work. She must be prepare dinner for my family. > She must be prepare dinner for my family. - She prepares dinner for my family. I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow. > I'm going to go to bed earily for tomorrow. - I'm going to bed early for tomorrow. → Let's review yesterday's lesson 1. I just finished having dinner with my family - Very Good 2. What day is parent's day in the Philippines ? ( Use a new word) - Very Good 3. I forgot your teaching last class ( Use a new word : forget ) - I forgot what you taught me last class. 4. I guess you are good teacher because when you explean me something, it's easy that understanging - I guess you are a good teacher because your expalnation is very understandable.
Hi Clara, Happy Parent's Day!! I was very glad while reading your letter about your mother. You are very lucky to have a very supportive and loving mom. Always tell her how much you love her. :) Talk to you later. ♥ Teacher Kat ♥ P.S. I corrected some of the sentences that you wrote. Kindly study the corrections I made. |