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제목 weather words 등록일 2015-06-17
내용 1. disaster
Every summer some places happen to be a disaster region because of heavy typhoon.

2. devastation
Such disasters like typhoon, flood and drought cause to bring devastation to the region.

3. tumultuous
I couldn't sleep well because of the tumultuous thunder last night.

4. overcast
The weather is overcast right now, but it will be clear in the afternoon.
담당강사 Cort1 등록일 2015-06-17
첨삭 내용

1. disaster: Every summer some places happen to be a disaster region because of heavy typhoons. 2. devastation: Such disasters like typhoons, floods, and droughts bring devastation to the region. 3. tumultuous: I couldn't sleep well because of the tumultuous thunder last night. 4. overcast The weather is overcast right now, but it will be clear in the afternoon.

 

Very good! I made a couple of little corrections, but overall, you did very well.

-Cort

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