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제목 Doing Chores 등록일 2016-06-27
내용 I do my chores everyday when I am at home, I usually have to hang up the clothes

and take out the garbage

My wife is responsible for preparing dinner.

I use a vacuum cleaner and clean the floor.

After finishing my chores I felt good.

I problem was that my daughter's is not play crying.
담당강사 Christie 등록일 2016-06-27
첨삭 내용

I do my chores everyday when I am at home, I usually have to hang up the clothes

and take out the garbage.

My wife is responsible for preparing dinner.

I use a vacuum cleaner and clean the floor.

After finishing my chores I feel good.

My problem is that my daughter is not playing but crying.

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