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제목	help, please	등록일	2016-07-18
내용	Many countries including Korea have applied economic sanctions against North Korea. According to broadcasting, people lives of North Korea are harder and Mr. Kim is preparing war. North Korean defectors are increasing year by year. Mr. Kim jong un is threatening South Korea and USA by attacking missile. The ministry of national defense decided to establish THAAD(Terminal High Altitude Area Defense) and selected a site. Most of Korean understand necessity of THAAD but they don’t want to establish around my area because of danger of electricmicro wave . A few days ago, the arranging area of THAAD was selected Seongju county in North Gyeongsangdo. Population of Seongju about twenty thousand and there is famous for melon(over 80% cultivating of our country) Most people of Seong are demonstrating that they didn’t know why their hometown was decided and they wondered their healthy and economic damage.
담당강사	Hunter1	등록일	2016-07-19
첨삭 내용	Very good, Rose! Many countries, including Korea, have applied economic sanctions against North Korea. According to the media, people's lives in North Korea are harder, and Kim Jong-un is preparing for war. North Korean defectors are increasing year by year. Kim Jong-un is threatening South Korea and the USA with missiles. The ministry of national defense decided to establish THAAD(Terminal High Altitude Area Defense) and selected a site. Most Koreans understand the necessity of THAAD, but they don’t want it in their area because of the danger of electric microwaves. A few days ago, the arranging area of THAAD was selected. It is in Seongju county, in North Gyeongsangdo. The population of Seongju is about twenty thousand, and the area is famous for melons(over 80% cultivating of our country) Most people of Seongju are demonstrating that they don't know why their hometown was selected, and they worry about their healthy and economic damage.