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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-26
내용 I don’t like to go p and down the stairs by walking.
If the escalator is nearby, I always use it.
I spend in sedentory work most of my office time.
I usually work in computing, meeting, and discussing.
I sometimes feel my body unusually if I sit down a desk in three to four hours.
My leg s are weaken and shoulders feel stiff.
These days, I try to stand up at least once an hour and walk around.
When I get to and from work, I walk from home to office and it takes about twenty to thirty minutes and it helps me.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-27
첨삭 내용

Excellent job, Rose :))

I don’t like walking up and down the stairs.
If an escalator is nearby, I always use it.
I spend most of time doing in sedentary office work.
I usually work at mycomputer, and have meetings or discussions.
My body sometimes feels unusual if I sit down at a desk for three to four hours.
My legs feel weak and my shoulders feel stiff.
These days, I try to stand up at least once an hour and walk around.
When I go to and from work, I walk from home to my office, and it takes about twenty to thirty minutes. That helps me feel better.

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