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제목 | help, please | 등록일 | 2016-07-26 |
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내용 | I don’t like to go p and down the stairs by walking. If the escalator is nearby, I always use it. I spend in sedentory work most of my office time. I usually work in computing, meeting, and discussing. I sometimes feel my body unusually if I sit down a desk in three to four hours. My leg s are weaken and shoulders feel stiff. These days, I try to stand up at least once an hour and walk around. When I get to and from work, I walk from home to office and it takes about twenty to thirty minutes and it helps me. |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-07-27 |
첨삭 내용 | Excellent job, Rose :)) I don’t like walking up and down the stairs. |