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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-27
내용 While I am reading and studying Amercian newspapers, I think I am a conservative.
The world is changing and my kids thoughts are different from me, but I am not used to these situation.
Till now, I am trying tp think commomsensibly.
Frankly, some men were as women but these happen performance life gag and drama and it's not reality.
A few years ago, a famous talent dared to come out and people was surprised at the news and it was socially controversial. After that he didn’t show up on the air but he resumes broadcasting activities now.
People including me don’t care for it.
To accept other social convention and myth, people need a long time.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-28
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Good job, Rose!

While I am reading and studying Amercian newspapers, I think I am a conservative.
The world is changing and my kids' thoughts are different from mine, but I am not used to these situations.
Till now, I am trying to think sensibly.
Some men dress as women for performances and entertainment.
A few years ago, a famous talent dared to come out and people were surprised at the news. It was socially controversial. After that he didn’t show up on the air but he resumes broadcasting activities now.
People including me don’t care for it.
To accept other social convention and myth, people need a long time.

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