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제목 Chuseok 등록일 2016-09-11
내용 Hi, there.

Chuseok, also known as Korean Thanksgiving Day, falls on September 15th. It is just around the corner!

During Chuseok holiday, some of my relatives and my family will gather at my house and have a many traditional foods together.

I am looking forward to the Chuseok holiday.
담당강사 Beth1 등록일 2016-09-12
첨삭 내용

Hi, there.

Chuseok, also known as Korean Thanksgiving Day, falls on September 15th. It is just around the corner!

During the Chuseok holiday, some of my relatives and my family will gather at my house and will have many(I added the word "will"because you are talking about a future event and I removed the word "a" because you are talking about many foods, not just one)  traditional foods together.

I am looking forward to the Chuseok holiday.

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Hi Cho,

The company is giving us one day off to celebrate Chuseok. However, since it is a Korean holiday no one else in my city, except my coworkers, will know about the holiday. To celebrate I'm going to go to the Korean restaurant in my city and eat some traditional Korean food. I think I will have bulgogi but I'm not sure yet. In America, Thanksgiving is not until November so I will not be celebrating with my family for 2 more months.  

Teacher Beth

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