영작교정
수강기간 중 영어로 일기 또는 자유로운 글을 작성해 주세요.
담당 강사가 직접 교정을 해 드립니다.
| 제목 | beach 1 | 등록일 | 2016-10-18 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 내용 | I like going to the beach in the summer. And I usually wear swimsuit and one piece. A few years ago, I put on my short jean and T-shirt and I felt easy to play. But after then, I got to know how it is difficult to do the laundry. My clothes were soked up the seawater and full of sand. So I couldn't use washing machine and it's very difficult. After this experience, I usually put on my swimsuit and one piece. Nowadays many people wear the rash guard. It is long and sand is not clunged. next summer, I will buy and put on it. |
||
| 담당강사 | Kris1 | 등록일 | 2016-10-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I like going to the beach every summer. |
||