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제목 | News paper3 | 등록일 | 2020-11-19 |
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내용 | I became interested in reading a newsparer when I was in university. At that time, I used to read the news paper that was provided whenever I got a break in the library. It was because I need to be good at common sense and trend in order to prepare for job interviw. It was really crucial, you know. Now, I read news paper in my office every morning, but it is my own, not common use. |
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담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2020-11-23 |
첨삭 내용 | I became interested in reading a newsparer when I was in university.
Correction:
I became interested in reading newspapers when I was a university student. At that time, I used to read the newspaper they offered us whenever I had a break. It was because I wanted to be well informed about a variety of subjects and common trends in order to be prepared for a potential job interview. That was really important for me then. These days I still read the newspaper in my office every morning, but I buy it for myself
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