Last Friday, I spent my time with my co-workers for the first time.

After school, we went to a BBQ restaurant and ate a lot of meat. Then we had some beer and Soju at a bar while chatting together. We shared our thoughts about our seniors who behave like teenager bullies. For example they didn't inform us about the day when we didn't have to go to work. So we ended up go to work and return home twice. Honestly we don't like them, I wish they would disappear in my life.

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Last Friday, I spent my time with my co-workers for the first time.

After school, we went to a BBQ restaurant and ate a lot of meat. Then we had some beer and soju at a bar while chatting together. We shared our thoughts about our seniors who behave like teenage bullies. For example, they didn't inform us about the day when we didn't have to go to work. So we ended up going to work and returning home twice. Honestly, we don't like them; I wish they would disappear from my life.

Hello Ms. Moon,

Your grammar is getting better and better now just be mindful of some verb tense and also the punctuation. Nice one!

~eliza