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| 제목 | My business trip 1. | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
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| 내용 | Hello, Hannah! I think you said it would be better to write a letter about my business trip. I prefer short business trips to long ones. But if I have to go on an overseas business trip, a long trip is okay! I rarely go on a business trip in this department now. But I went out of town a lot when I was working in the City Development Project Department. (for example, Seoul, Busan, etc. in my country) And I also went on an overseas business trips to Japan, Singapore, Hong Kong, Shanghai and Taiwan for architectural benchmarking. |
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| 담당강사 | HannahP2usa | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hey Juyeong, I'm so glad that you wrote this email to apply your learnings. Part 1 is perfect! You had a great opening and immediately set your preference for short business trips within the country and long ones abroad. Well done! Hannah |
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