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| 제목 | My business trip 2. | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
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| 내용 | There, I looked around many buildings, such as various houses, memorial halls, museums, etc. I remember that I normally got notified of the trip about 3 to 4 weeks ago. And It’s also important who I go on a business trip with. If I go with my co-worker, I will be excited all day. But if I go with whom is not my company members such as other government office members, I will be uncomfortable all day. Because the government office is a higher-level organization than our company. |
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| 담당강사 | HannahP2usa | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hi Juyeong, This is a good continuation. You added details on your preferred activities and companions on your business trips. I have several minimal corrections for grammar: - "I remember that I normally get notified about the trip 3 to 4 weeks before the actual date." Hannah |
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